Forgotten Realms Movie
Made a quick edit to the flashback scene. Added some lines I forgot. And will finish this scene later.
"You people have not given Private Pyle the proper motivation! So, from now on, when Private Pyle fucks up... I will not punish him. I will punish all of you! And the way I see it, ladies... you owe me for one jelly donut! Now, get on your faces!"
I have definatly enjoyed reading this screenplay Inny. The story has been a good one and will truly shake the north up. It would let a movie gower unfamiliar with the realms see just about as much of the deversity it holds in one movie. The north has a lot to offer and it gives a good sense of what the realms are about.
Ofcourse the struggle between good and evil makes great plot, but, the thing that sets it apart from most of the other works that try to portray a DnD environe is that there seems to be a large faction of evil (drow) and that there could/is a never ending struggle. Not only between the drow and surface. But between the evil factions aswell. The mentions of the Brotherhood in regard to the Lolthites. It makes for something larger and more persistant. Like this world will continue even after this "movie" has ended. That in my small insignifigant opinion is what the Realms are truly about.
Keep it up Inny, your doing great!!
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Ofcourse the struggle between good and evil makes great plot, but, the thing that sets it apart from most of the other works that try to portray a DnD environe is that there seems to be a large faction of evil (drow) and that there could/is a never ending struggle. Not only between the drow and surface. But between the evil factions aswell. The mentions of the Brotherhood in regard to the Lolthites. It makes for something larger and more persistant. Like this world will continue even after this "movie" has ended. That in my small insignifigant opinion is what the Realms are truly about.
Keep it up Inny, your doing great!!
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PC: Lonely Drow
Server: Wishing for an Underdark Home
Server: Wishing for an Underdark Home
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Last edited by Inaubryn on Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:53 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"You people have not given Private Pyle the proper motivation! So, from now on, when Private Pyle fucks up... I will not punish him. I will punish all of you! And the way I see it, ladies... you owe me for one jelly donut! Now, get on your faces!"
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Last edited by Inaubryn on Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"You people have not given Private Pyle the proper motivation! So, from now on, when Private Pyle fucks up... I will not punish him. I will punish all of you! And the way I see it, ladies... you owe me for one jelly donut! Now, get on your faces!"
I have reached "Fade Out" in the actual script at roughly 120 pages, and have removed the ALFA postings. Anybody wanting to read the finished version can PM me and I can send it to you. Otherwise, if you just wanna speculate on how it ends that's fine. Other than that if you don't care, that's fine too. But, this is where the Library entries cease. For all those that paid attention, commented, suggested and critiqued, thanks. For the rest of ya... pfft. j/k
"You people have not given Private Pyle the proper motivation! So, from now on, when Private Pyle fucks up... I will not punish him. I will punish all of you! And the way I see it, ladies... you owe me for one jelly donut! Now, get on your faces!"