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Was searching around some of the hidden depths of my computer tonight, and found two half started stories, that I nearly begun a year or so ago. Thought I'd post them up, might motivate me to write some more... or press the delete key :)

The Hammer

The hammer struck the table. The verdict was made. All the witnesses had testified. All the archives reviewed. All the experts consulted. The decision was clear. He was guilty. But guilty of what? Guilty of nothing other than guilt itself. Guilty of a crime that isn’t a crime. Guilty of breaking laws that were never laws. It was clear to all who witnessed his actions that this man was guilty. It was clear to all who knew him that he was insane. And everyone knew that he was a threat to not only man kind, but the entire structure of existence as we know it. He was guilty and of that there was no doubt.

To be locked away for all of time – that was to be his punishment. It was against the One Text to take a life of another being, even if they had committed such monstrosities as this man had. But that didn’t worry His High Honour Ferdruck of Middleshire IX – he had something much worse installed than death. Death was to easy going for such great crimes. To be sentenced to death was to be given an escape, a passage away from the devastation that was caused. Death, His High Honour believed, should be given to only those who have loyally followed the One Text and have actively worked to improve the worlds for the benefit for all of life. No, to be given death was much to kind. With the powers he had at his disposal there were punishments that could make people beg for death within hours. There were punishments that could make even the strongest of people unable to even think of begging for death. And then, to top all those, there was this punishment.

The punishment to be given for the crime was reserved for only special cases. Only for the direst of crimes and even then rarely given. But to all those who had been following the case over the past 23 years, this was clearly one of those crimes. Rumours flew, as rumours tend to do, that even His Imperial Majesty himself fully supported the punishment in this particular case.

The trail itself had gone on for longer than many cared to believe. Been as unique as it was many years of research were needed to find the laws imposed by the last ruling family all those centuries ago, that were required to convict the accused. More time was needed to find the evidence to prove him guilty. And finally when it looked like a conclusion was nearing, the Great Strike of 1502 broke out, stopping the flowing of the great trade ways for over a decade, leading to the death of His Imperial Majesty’s first wife – who is no longer mentioned by name due to royal decree – and, seen by many to be worse than any other of the great disasters of that period, all previously collected evidence mysteriously disappeared. What ever the cause for the disappearance may have been, it set things back many years.

Ferdruck was getting sick of the case, despite the prestige and high pay he was receiving from, not only the crown, but also many of the major churches as they tried to sway his unswayable views. The case had been going too long and he longed to return to his family. His youngest son, Tomos, had finished his schooling last year and was now out in the real world with his newly wed wife and his elder daughter had been granted an honorary place as a professor at her college, something almost unheard of from women – all of that he had missed due to this infernal case. But he had sworn to spend his life serving the One Text, as he kept reminding himself, and neither family nor anything else could stand in the way, for the oath was binding in more ways that the common folk imagined. After this case he could at last retire on the earnings and spend the rest of his years living with his wife in a little estate out in the country they would purchase. And finally the day had arrived which he had been waiting for, for all those years; the conclusion of the trail.

The high court room was an ancient building, built in a time before record. With its’ beautiful marble pillars that outlined rows upon rows of cushioned seats; the great stained-glass windows that encircled the room, casting many colours of lights across the audience; and of course the great stand, located at the far end of the court room. This was Ferdruck’s personal favourite of all the remarkable feature. Raised one meter above the rest of the floor, this was where he and the eight other judges sat in a semi-circle around the accused. At the top of the semi-circle rested a particularly fancy, amazingly carved, wooden throne. This was the official throne of His Imperial Majesty, although it was maintained more out of tradition than practical use, as no one Ferdruck knew could remember a time when His Imperial Majesty last visited a trail. Directly in front of the semi-circle sat two desks which housed both the defendant and the prosecutor. Finally, sitting at the edge of the great stand was chained - on a seat that seemed to be rotatable on the judge’s whim between facing the audience and themselves – sat the accused.

The hammer struck the table. A loud booming voice echoed from his mouth, making the occupants of the hall leap slightly as the silence was broken.

“We have gathered here this afternoon to continue trail regarding the possible breech in the code presented to our ancestors in the One Text. We have gathered here this afternoon to listen and review all the evidence presented to us, to give us the knowledge to truly judge the accused, as required by the code presented to our ancestors in the One Text,” Fredruck begun, as tradition required. With a flip of a leaver the accused chair spun round to face the judge panel. “You have been brought here today changed of crimes that haven’t been witnessed in the civilized world since the reign of the great Imperial Majesty Drenrick the First”. A small rustle of noise swept across the room as Ferdruck mentioned His Imperial Majesty Drenrick I, the founder of what now is the greatest empire on the face of the world, by name – an act that was rarely done. After pausing for a moment to wait for the fidgeting to stop, Fredruck continued. “How do you plead?”

The man raised his head, his eyes meeting with His High Honour. The years of imprisonment during the trail had certainly taken its’ toll on the accused. Once, when Fredruck first encounter the man, he was a hansom, charismatic young man, probably about the same age of his son. Now, the man before him seemed to be ancient; his eyes told of experiences that very few had ever witnessed; his hair greyed and his face aged past recognition. Their eyes met, in a battle that was carried out each time he was presented before the judge panel. After a few moments Ferdruck diverted his eyes, knowing that there was no advantage to be gained by defeating this lunatic today. Even if the accused did win that battle, the war would be won by the true servants of the One Text before the day was out.

In a gruff voice, that was barely more than a whisper, the accused replied. A simple reply that all had been expecting, yet still sent whispers waving out through the courtroom. “Innocent”

His High Honour stood up from his seat, the Staff of Judgement in his hand, and walked across to the accused. Kneeling over him, he whispered softly in his ear, in a tone that could only be described as harsh and hating. “You continue to deny the truth despite all the evidence presented before us, clearly labelling you as guilty? It does not matter any more, as a decision has been reached. You will rot, before I am finished with you,” Ferdruck almost spat out the last two words, before marching back to his seat.

“After careful consideration of all the evidence that has been placed before us, we, those who have been trusted with the judgement of the one who stands before us, have voted and a conclusion has been reached. With a result of two to seven, it has been decided that he is found guilty of breeching the codes found within the One Text, putting the whole existence on the verge of destruction. I am faced with a problem when finding a fitting punishment for such a vast crime, but it has become clear to me that only one course of action is available to us”.

His High Honour Ferdrick of Middleshire IX paused, as he looked out over the hundreds of faces before him. Lowering his voice, he spoke the words which would not only haunt him for the rest of his life, but also cast a shadow upon the entire empire for decades to come.

“You are hereby sentenced to the Care of Elsocria the Blind for all eternity. All previously held land and possessions shall be taken into the care of the Empire. All previously held titles are revoked and all positions removed. As of this point onwards, speaking the name Auther Goldcoin shall be considered equal to treason and tried as such. His name shall be wiped from all record, to be replaced with the single word Traitor”.

Traitor… Traitor… Traitor…
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Jonathan and God

God chuckled to himself. He was having a good day. He always did enjoy Thursdays, for some reason, but this one was particularly good. He filed away the report on the bacterial coverage in central Africa and rang a small metal bell that was on his desk. An old, stressed looking lady, wearing clothes that seemed two centuries out of fashion, promptly entered the room, holding a clip board in her hand, with a large, messy pile of paper on top of it. A small child, no more than 8 years old, followed closely behind at her heels.

“Good morning, Mrs Nelson. What appointments do I have today?” God asked with a smile.

“Hmm…. Let me just check… let me just check,” replied Mrs Nelson, as she shuffled through the impossibly large pile of paper she was carrying. “At 10.30 this morning Mr Rogers is here representing the Brazilian rainforests. Quite a controversial issue, I’m afraid. Then at noon, Mr and Mrs Wilson are here to ask a few personal favours – they assured me that they knew you personally.” Mrs Nelson looked up at God, questioning if this was correct. He nodded slightly and waved her onwards. “Yes… Right. Then you had between 12.30 and 3 crossed off for a quick game of golf. Although make sure that…”

“Ah, excellent,” God interrupted. “I had forgotten all about that. Seems it will be a great day! But please do go on, Mrs Nelson.”

“Alright, let me see. At 3pm we have a representative of the Southern Pacific Green Cod – they wish to protest about their proposed discovery this coming Spring. I’m afraid he did not leave a name. Then at 4 we ha… ah!” At this point, Mrs Nelson did not have a fatal heart attack, she merely slipped, throwing pieces of paper all over the room. She quickly knelt down on her knees, crawling around the office trying to gather all the loose paper. Both God and the young boy found this awfully funny.

“Oh, Mrs Nelson! You really should start using one of these laptops! Would save you carrying around all this paper everywhere you go!” God suggested in-between fits of laughter.

“Oh no, no, no,” Mrs Nelson replied after she had gathered all the paper and straightened her dress. She doesn’t look the happiest, God thought to himself. Perhaps she doesn’t like Thursdays. “They’re untrustworthy things. Always breaking down and eating all of your work. I mean, just the other day, my youngest daughter Margaret’s laptop was stolen while she was sitting at the station! No, give it 10 years and everyone will be using the good old pen and paper again.”

A large grin grew across God’s face. “Would you like to place a wager on that, Mrs Nelson?”

“No, I would not. Gambling is a sin, if you are forgetting. Anyway, I still remember what happened last time we had a wager.”

God broke out in laughter again. “Ah, I had forgotten all about that! You still owe me $10.”

Mrs Nelson frowned. “I owe you nothing. Changing the fabrics of reality is hardly a fair means of winning.”

“Oh well, I don’t really need the money anyway. Now, where were we? Ah yes, of course.” God peered over his desk at the small boy by Mrs Nelsons feet and smiled a warm smile, like a god would. “Who is this young chap you have with you, Mrs Nelson?”

Mrs Nelson looked down at the boy, with a look that would make most people feel like they are in the way and unwanted. “This,” she said “is Jonathan, my grandson. You remember my daughter Margaret? Yes? Well, it’s her eldest.”

“Ah, how splendid,” God remarked. “Perhaps young John would like to earn a few dollars today? My caddie phoned in sick, so I need someone to carry around my clubs this afternoon.”
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Jonathan was a strange boy. But then I guess anyone would be if they lived the life he had. Sometimes it seemed to Jonathan that Lady Luck had been on holiday when he was born. In fact, this was exactly what had happened. During Jonathan’s birth, Lady Luck was enjoying a weekend sailing around the Greek Islands with her latest boy friend – but this was something that Jonathan was unaware of. Jonathan was a clumsy, unpopular lad, always breaking things and never been picked for school sports teams, not that he really enjoyed that sort of thing anyway. And then there was his grandmother.

I’m sure you can imagine what it was like for him at school. All the other children in their class could say “My Granddad is a doctor”, or “Granny use to be a teacher”. But Jonathan couldn’t say any such thing. For him, it was “My Grandma is God’s secutary.” It certainly caused a lot of laughter from his peers. To make matters worse, when ever he tried to ask his grandma about it, she would always hush him and tell him that when he was older she would tell him all about it. She’d been saying that for as long as Jonathan could remember and still hadn’t told him anything!

One Thursday, a few years ago, Jonathan had a plan! It was a good plan, if he did say so himself. His Grandma, he knew from careful observations, woke each morning at 6.30. She would then spend the next hour and a half preparing for the day ahead, before taking out a large golden key and unlocking the door in her kitchen. After quickly looking around to make sure no one was watching (luckily she never saw Jonathan!) she would quickly sneak inside. The door would shut, the lock would click, and she would be gone until 5 that evening, when the door would swing slightly open and she would pop back out!

This had always bothered Jonathan. His mother had said to him that Grandma was God’s secutary, although he still wasn’t completely sure what that meant. He knew God was some guy who people talked to when they went to Church and that he created an apple tree or something like that. Jonathan also knew that a secutary was someone who wrote things down. So perhaps his grandma wrote things about apples. But then why all that secrecy – even Jonathan could write things about apples. Determined to find out, Jonathan set about scheming.

On the first attempt, Jonathan tried to jam some card in the door just as it was closing, jamming the door open so he could sneak through afterwards, but the cat spoiled it all. Just as the door was closing, his Grandma’s evil black cat, Ginger, decided it would be a good time to jump up on the kitchen bench, knocking the kettle over. With the loud bang it created, a few things happened at the same time. First of all, both Jonathan and Ginger went leaping out the window at the same time, crashing in mid air and resulting in a scratched boy and a scared cat. Second note worthy event was Grandma came back to see what the noise was and hence the card fell out. The third event, which is arguable more important than the other two combined, was the contents of the kettle stained Grandma’s beautiful floor.
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