Failure of a Knight

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Joos
Frost Giant
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Post by Joos »

Sad to see a strong character go. Nicely written though.
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KalevD
Gelatinous Cube
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Post by KalevD »

Excellent story Ven, a facinating portrayal of what place (if any) honour has in the faithful of Bane.

I'll miss Darius, if only because you never had the chance to try and convert Kalev, as you all so often promised to do ;) I look forward to your next incarnation - and don't even think about straying from this path you've started down! You play dark characters better than most others I've met.
Mikayla
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Post by Mikayla »

I will chime in with the others - the portrayal of Darius' judgment and fate at the hands of Bane is excellent. We all like to think our PCs will be Solars, Succubi, Balors or Demi-Gods in the next life, but for the vast majority, they will be naught but petitioners, and in that realm, to be a petitioner is to be a lemure. Well done Vendrin.
ALFA1-NWN1: Sheyreiza Valakahsa
NWN2: Layla (aka Aliyah, Amira, Snake and others) and Vellya
NWN1-WD: Shein'n Valakasha
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