Karin of Hadreth's Glen

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Vaelahr
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Karin of Hadreth's Glen

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The silver thread gave a dim glow in the moonlight.
Over her heart, the unicorn's likeness.

His eyes are no more
Prized emeralds stolen from me


Her weathered tent put away.
Her cloak blanketed by dawn's fading mist.

His breath on my neck, soft in my ear
and sweet in my face, cider-sweet


Her fingers wove the morning braid.
A ribbon of winter white within.

No more nights with his mouth against mine
Oh how I miss those kisses


Lathander's smile pouring through canopies of green.
The birds sing their daily aria.

My tongue, spiced with wine
Dancing with his


Her stride through the forest.
Long, swift and quiet.

His breath is no more
His last, a zephyr in these woods


Resting on a couch of root and moss.
Wide eyes search the copse.

I bind unto myself today
Mielikki's might, Mielikki's blade


Her fingers wove the afternoon braid.
A thread of autumn red within.

What's this my Queen,
A foraging bear?


Bears have no beaks,
Nor eyes of cunning bloodlust.

Unwelcome monster
Wanton slayer of fawn friends


Bowstring sings and arrows bite deep
The cruel beast gallops fast.

Oh for just one last sup and dessert
To be served once more at Corgrym's table


The silver thread is dark in the moonlight.
Over her heart, the unicorn's likeness.

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Post by rudy2688 »

:cry:

So sad.... makes me truly regret retiring Richard....

Well written, Vael... well written...
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Well done:)
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Post by Ogregrim »

Lovely and moving. Bravo. I only know the tale second hand, but now, it has poignancy it hertofore had been denied.
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Post by Mizbiz »

Karin is a perfect exaple of a ranger of Mielikki.

Vaelahr, I don't know when I've seen one played better. Karin's quite up there with the greats and a shining member of the Fellowship of the Silver Unicorn. Her story moved me to tears.

Thank you,

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Post by Vaelahr »

I would recommend these writings in this order:

In Search of A Legacy - The Tale of Richard Falrin
Karin's love. A somewhat fickle romance often found in youth.

The Growing Season* (or “Corgrym’s prayer”)

Karin of Hadreth's Glen
Karin's thoughts while on a patrol; a blend of mourning, memories of carnal pleasure, a prayer, and a last wish. The italicised narrative, something I gleaned from Misty's writing.

The Fallen One
I've read the log from this session. Inwintersshadow with some powerful emotes, concluding with *he chokes back a groan and his heart becomes iron, closing like a tomb*. Good stuff.

The Promise
"The God of the Qurʾan is arguably the most unpleasant character in all fiction: jealous and proud of it; a petty, unjust, unforgiving control-freak; a vindictive, bloodthirsty ethnic cleanser; a misogynistic, homophobic, racist, infanticidal, genocidal, filicidal, pestilential, megalomaniacal, sadomasochistic, capriciously malevolent bully." -- Vaelahr
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